Reviewed By: kaichouneko [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2010 18:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has the potential to be a decent story, however the lack of grammar and any form of writing style causes me to run from reading this story. My suggestion in the future is to work on your writing style more. Practice writing short stories and papers in school.
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