"Fatal Abduction" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Sesshoumaru'sPriestess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2011 01:00 EDT Comment/Review: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO I need more than this!! Please!!!! | Title: Interesting Reviewed By: kanna37 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2010 21:09 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: You did well with the characterizations - but it felt a little bit chopped off at the end - no real resolution. That would be okay if this wasn't a one-shot, but even with the possibility of a sequel, the ending should have given at least a little more relief. But especially for your first Sess/Kag - really well done! Amber
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