| "I'll Fight For You" Reviews/Comments [ 32 ] |
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Title: Kyo
Reviewed By: Neon-Panda [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2010 19:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am in LOVE! It is rare to find a SasuNaru fanfic that has them acting in a believable manner. I love the execution of the plot-line, and the wonderful way you describe everything. Aside from a few grammatical mistakes every now and then, this is possibly one of the best Kyuubi-Naruto merging fanfics I've ever read. Hopefully Kyuubi doesnt continue to be an ass-hole too much now XD I look forward to new chapters and exciting storylines :)
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Reviewed By: sesshys numba1 gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2010 18:49 EDT
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awe i love the end soo cute :) great lemon too ;)
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Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: September 06, 2010 21:13 EDT
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-chuckles- oh my, this is new. wonder how gaara is going to feel about this one. poor guy.
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Reviewed By: sesshys numba1 gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2010 18:52 EDT
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Woo yay SasUKE! cnt wait for the next chapter and mann is Gaara gonna be pissed haha
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Title: ROFL
Reviewed By: KaitouRyuki [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2010 23:28 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think I'm getting used to the idea that Sasuke or Naruto can just easily escape Konoha at any given time. Can't wait for the next chapters~
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Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: August 28, 2010 23:36 EDT
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Wow, I wasn't expecting an update from this fic for a while, very nice. Poor Sasuke, he's trying his hardest to get to Naruto. I hope Gaara doesn't try to kill him before he can even see the blonde. Thanks for the chapter! We all love them and want more more MORE! Haha, greedy little bastards aren't we?
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Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: August 20, 2010 02:43 EDT
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Why I am awake at 2:39AM reading your story I have no idea but it wasn't unsatisfying. Thanks for the update. I hope Gaara doesnt kill our poor Sasuke. I would write more but alas.. it is late and my mind isn't functioning quite as well as I'd like it to. See you soon! Passing Reader~
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Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: August 12, 2010 21:38 EDT
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such a short chapter, i want more -sighs heavily- but very good, i wonder how everything goes when they all meet?
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Reviewed By: sesshys numba1 gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2010 19:33 EDT
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woa! i wasn't expecting that! please update soon!
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Title: ^.^
Reviewed By: KaitouRyuki [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2010 14:48 EDT
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OOhh the calm before the storm~! Does that mean Sasuke and Naruto are in for some drama in coming chapters? Can't wait to see how this plays out~! *takes a cookie* Yummy~!
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Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: July 28, 2010 03:05 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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positive* heh.. no edit? i forgot to rate as well
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Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: July 28, 2010 03:04 EDT
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this fic.. my gods its so fun to read. i am addicted to the plot, and how sasuke and naruto are together as well as how kyuubi is put into the story. dont worry about the spelling and grammar issues because i hardly notice them at all i am so enthralled. write, write, write!! im posotive im not the only one who wants to see more from this amazing fic!
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Reviewed By: D On: July 28, 2010 01:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great fic. It's rare to find an adult fic, yaoi or any type, actually that isnt just smut.... Please continue. This story is kind of addicting.
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Reviewed By: KaitouRyuki [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2010 00:08 EDT
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This is really good, I hope to see some action between Sasuke and Naruto soon, maybe some fluff and Kyubii madness ;P
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Reviewed By: sesshys numba1 gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2010 21:14 EDT
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awee chapter 4 is was cute :D please update soon!
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