| "I'll Fight For You" Reviews/Comments [ 32 ] |
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Reviewed By: ero kira On: December 16, 2010 20:26 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so chapter 18 is not loading onto my computer D: i dont know if its actually posted or not yet but i thought i would let you know so you could fix the matter :] LOVE the story btw! |
Title: GOT IT!
Reviewed By: Lunar_Storm [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2010 21:51 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
allrightty then! switching my favorite bar link! to Fanfiction! muwahahaha AND TO MORE CHAPTERS TO READ BEST DAY OF MY LIFE!! !Chase! |
Reviewed By: mk On: November 22, 2010 22:45 EST
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Wh...wh...wh......WHAT?! There's a new chapter, but it's blank?!! How did this happen???!!!? I'm enjoying the sotry, in case you can't tell. |
Title: >.
Reviewed By: Lunar_Storm [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2010 19:15 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg it feels like its been so long xD i reread the sasu bottom part again last night YOU KNOW WHAT IM TALKING ABOUT! and yummy xD i wonder how this is gonna work when naru gets big xD and i wonder how bad hes gonna feel because i tell you the last weeks of my pregnancy were horrible i couldnt even sleep peacefully between her kicking or getting stuck on one side of my stomic orrrr there was the indigestion -.- and then the swollen feet hands legs you name it the only thing good about the last week was that i stoped pucking by then xD and bending over FORGET THAT XD i couldnt even see my toes xD then your boobs leek and swell and hurt ALL THE TIME! lol just thinking about it all makes it funny now thats it over xD anyway! UPDATE SOON I NEED ANOTHER CHAPPY! IM CRAVING ANOTHER CHAPTER! |
Reviewed By: KaitouRyuki [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2010 12:28 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Totally a 10, now I'm not so sure what Kyuubi's MO is and what to expect from the story. Great suspense. Two thumbs up~!
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Title: O.O
Reviewed By: Lunar_Storm [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2010 18:25 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
holy fuckin christ allmighty! im gonna tell you the 1st thing that came out of my mouth when the chapter ended was i hate you XD but know that i ment it with love. FINAL FUCKIN LY! (i know i swar alot xD) LOL omg i hope sasuke survies this and i hope naruto doesent hate himself because of it and i hope that naruto can stop the kyuubi and omg i have so many HOPES right now i just want a happily ever after i want sasuke to be okay and i want the village to except sasu and naru relationship and i want them to have a happy baby together ahhhhhhh but most of all i just want another chapter! this is the hardest thing of my life waiting for updates. but every chapter reminds me of how worth it, it is ^_^ (great chapter, and i thought you made it sound real. your so good at staying true to the charaters) UPDATE SOON! (lol i know right you just updated -.-) Allways Watching Chase
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Reviewed By: CatyCal95 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2010 14:15 EDT
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10 to everything! a lot of work rating! hope u update soon...
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Title: reread chapter sand
Reviewed By: Lunar_Storm [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2010 13:11 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i hope neji can save gaara. i loved that part with gaara controling the sand on neji's body, that was hot xD and rereading it again makes me relize just how dense sasuke is XD but its cute and i keep thinking about the sharingan and how kakashi should be able to see narutos chakra womb... lol ive just been completly obsessed with this story >.< it feels like its been a week since you updated but i keep telling myself its only been 5 days -.- patience chase patience..
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Title: ahhhhhh
Reviewed By: Lunar_Storm [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2010 16:24 EDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omfg WHYY WHYYY POOR GAARA!!!!FUCKIN DEMONS@!FUCKING SHUKAKU!!!!! OMFG THERE BETTER BE A GOOD ENDING FOR GAARA! AND OMFG WHEN IS SASUKE GONNA FIND OUT!AHHHH IM ON THE EDGE OF MY SEAT! UPDATE SOON~!!! watching everyday! Chase link to this story now on my favorits bar xD
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Title: O.O
Reviewed By: KaitouRyuki [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2010 23:39 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Speechless
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Title: LOL
Reviewed By: KaitouRyuki [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2010 22:28 EDT
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Just retyping an old comment but it might be slightly different from the original message~ Don't wanna get on your bad side~ lol I knew it was either gonna be a Lee or Neji with Gaara pairing, those two seem to be the more popular Gaara pairing. Wish Naru was having twins, btw will Neji impreg Gaara? lol can't wait for your awesome updates~
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Title: HOLY SHIT A FUCKING MAZING
Reviewed By: Lunar_Storm [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2010 02:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i honestly love this story ive been reading it religously for the last 2 days o.o best damn story ever and please god update soon you are just so perfect and i want sasuke to find out soon or i might die i need like a nother 10 chapters to satisfy my reading urge in this story .. i was at work today talking about it with my friend and now shes gonna read it too xD i dont even know how many people i told about it today at work so please finish it i cant stand to watch another story im in love with stop and never start again and i think i would cry for a week if this one did .. but anyway im serious update soo im gonna check everyday and i know it will take you atleast a couple of weeks to update but im still gonna do it Always Watching Chase
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Reviewed By: Neon-Panda [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2010 23:52 EDT
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I love the new chapter, very good. :) Very minor mistakes in punctuation, but otherwise, well written. I can't wait for the new chapter!
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Title: 10
Reviewed By: KaitouRyuki [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2010 22:15 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
TEN~!!!!!!!!!! lol, can't wait for more~ Have you thought of a name for the child yet?
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Title: P.S.
Reviewed By: Neon-Panda [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2010 19:28 EDT
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I have never (and I cannot stress to you how serious I am when I say this) EVER read a sasunaru fanfic where I have enjoyed Sasuke being on bottom. So kudos to you, and my previously strict sasuke-as-seme-only ways are now mush more open to SasuNaruSasu.
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