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Reviewed By: KaitouRyuki [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2010 20:00 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow Wasn't expecting that much to happen. Keep up the awesome work and I can't wait to see what other surprises you have in store~!
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Reviewed By: Yuuki_Gaara_Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2010 00:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah haha sorry i shouldv'e spell checked one more time. i'm working on chapter two right now.
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Title: Interesting
Reviewed By: KaitouRyuki [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2010 23:49 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not bad, however did you forget to change Kyo to Ryu? I'm curious as to how the plot will continue since certain events were changed.
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