| "Tapestry of Time" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: marishaten On: August 22, 2012 13:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful exploration of the time warp - but more importantly what an amazing exploration of the pain and angst felt by Inuyasha upon losing Kagome. Truly a memorable tale. Thank you for sharing it. |
Reviewed By: CHICKenPOtPIe On: June 11, 2012 13:03 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say, I'm absolutely addicted to your stories. The way you get into the characters' emotions, all the while keeping them in cannon is rare to see in most fanfiction, especially InuYasha fanfiction (at least that's what I've encountered). |
Reviewed By: mamosere On: April 17, 2012 08:59 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As usual this is also a good story. You made me cry in this one, i felt sorry for the old inuyasha but at least they still have a happy ending.Love it, that's all i can say. |
Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2012 20:33 EDT
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talk about string theory and timeline... i am re-reading this and wondering why when she likely would have visited her other friends about a week later that she would have found a very similarly dirty and possibly starving contrite inuyasha... unless she wasn't going to visit. likely she would have planned to visit her friends (who she wouldn't abandon even if inuyasha said what he did) all the while avoiding inuyasha. but if she did that then there would be no story and the time loop wouldn't have been created... lolz ...just ignore me, i know not what i speak. |
Reviewed By: King Baka [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2010 21:47 EDT
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"Screw the timeline." I hear that! Time can be so confusing, but I like what you did with it here. Good choice going with present tense; I think past tense wouldn't have fit with the story.
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Reviewed By: JRMaxwell On: July 28, 2010 04:12 EDT
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I love stories that look at the time dimension. Well done.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2010 00:21 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wonderful story... really liked it... good job... great work!
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Reviewed By: soliea0death [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2010 09:03 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bravo! I felt like crying for the elder Inuyasha *sniff*. I'm surprised no one else ever thought about this, when an elder Inuyasha would show up in Kagome's time and such. It's always either Sesshomaru, or Shippou, I think someone used Kouga once, but anyway you never see Inuyasha telling her how to fix things. It was also really smart at the end when it was both Kagome and Inuyasha as elders, because it stood as proof that the timeline continues as it should. Excellent work (as usual)!!
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Reviewed By: raven2010 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2010 02:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story it's beautiful..thanks for a great fic keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: ananova [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2010 23:20 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was great. Never really seen this idea done before, at least not done like this where time keeps looping. And when you had old Inuyasha explaining to Kagome, you made me want to cry. You know a story is a good one when it touches you like that. Great job.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2010 22:54 EDT
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this was really great!-- i was thinking string theories and different sci-fi/brit sci-fi shows that had time and dimensional travel (leave it to my brain to go off into some crazy tangent) but i guess someone would have to meet her outside the well to explain stuff to her-- the never ending circle... ♣ oh, and it was a great story too!! ♥ gin
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Title: Woah!
Reviewed By: kanna37 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2010 22:09 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn! That was a good one... made me wanna cry! Amber
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