| "Boiled Over" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: Mamosere On: May 22, 2012 04:15 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it. I thought Inuyasha seems to be out of character when it seems like he's going to force Kagome and i thought it was their first time, but i like your twist in the end that they are already mated, it explains why Inuyasha is acting like that. Really enjoyed reading this, as usual it's a brilliant story that is well written. Thank you for such a great story. |
Reviewed By: Sesshoumaru'sPriestess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2011 18:10 EDT
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I thought for sure that he had taken her by force. Imagine my surprise once I learned it was a regular thing!!! Hahaha |
Reviewed By: White Luna [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2010 12:45 EDT
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I loved that you made it that they'd already done it before! No wonder he dragged her off like a cave man LOL I would have too!
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Reviewed By: Nilima On: August 16, 2010 16:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
No words can describe the masterpiece you have typed, yet, I can still try: humor,sense of adventure and sensuality brilliantly and efficaciously packaged into a heart warming one-shot, I loved the subtle signs hinting at the beloved couple's preceding intimacy...All in all, authors like you make me glad to be an avid reader of fan fictions.
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Reviewed By: King Baka [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2010 18:23 EDT
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Hehehe, this story was heading to a dark place and then did a u-turn in a hurry. Nice twist there, especially since you always do first time Inu/Kag lemons.
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Reviewed By: little_white_kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2010 16:49 EDT
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Hah hah, you've done it again. Making me think one thing, and totally surprising me! I wasn't too happy, thinking "Oh no, Splendent pulled the rape!card D=". But of course you smashed that little assumption in the end LOL. Great job!
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Reviewed By: Darkil [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2010 04:45 EDT
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correction to that.. it wasn't strapped that i was thinking of.. it was submission.... strapped was just one that disturbed me, lol... got them confused cause they're the only two of yours that I have put on my mental list of do not re read... anyway... yeah... this ones good though... ^^
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Reviewed By: Darkil [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2010 04:35 EDT
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hmm... the structure of this reminds me of another of your stories... Strapped... though unlike Strapped... I didn't dislike this one.. Strapped was just... umm... yeah... but this one was good ^^ keep up the great work Splendant!
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Reviewed By: blackbutterfly15 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2010 00:47 EDT
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Aww how adorable. I loved the twist at the near end.
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Reviewed By: soliea0death [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2010 10:14 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nicely done! I wasn't expecting the part in the end where they had already mated. Course, it did make a bit more sense for him to have less control after already having her before. But you expect him to be like that anyway cause, well, he's a guy! hehehehe......Great Job! Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: ananova [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2010 09:35 EDT
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Very nice. I loved it. I especially liked the twist near the end where we find out that they had actually been mated for awhile. You really made it seem like it was going to be their first time. And Inuyasha's comment about creating a monster was perfect, especially considering that it was him that could no longer control the urge. Great job.
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Reviewed By: raven2010 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2010 04:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Inuyasha this was hilarious I love it you made my day.LOL thanks
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