| "The Gravity Room" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: great
Reviewed By: lo On: May 21, 2012 21:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a lot of fun to read. I liked what you did with the characters and I loved all of the parings you chose. The personalities and character interaction was great, highly amusing. I really enjoyed this, great work. |
Reviewed By: Peppa Pig On: August 09, 2010 00:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good job, let us enjoy 'Vegeta in denial' thing for a while though, I'll be definitely checking for updates!
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Title: :)
Reviewed By: Amy aka Purple Ink On: August 02, 2010 19:04 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really liked the first two chapters! I find it funny that even though Vegeta Had a dream about him and Kakarot/Goku having sex, he still denies liking him. i can't wait for the part where they get together! (My username on this website is Purple Ink. I wasn't logged in while reviewing.) GREAT JOB!
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