"Takato's heated time" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: Keltic On: August 04, 2014 05:21 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wish this fanfic could have been finished, the story it self really
does have potential :/ Hopefully someone might come along and
continue it
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Title: One who protects smiles Reviewed By: Kamen Rider Kuuga the 3rd On: March 13, 2011 16:32 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This fic is awsome please for the LOVE OF ALL THINGS HOLY UPDATE QUICK! |
Reviewed By: Joker's Wild On: March 10, 2011 08:00 EST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: How about later they have sex with Renamon's other forms to break the monotomy? |
Title: review Reviewed By: Kamen Rider Hazaru On: January 10, 2011 16:13 EST Comment/Review: Good chapter so what wiil happen when everone wakes up the next monening is Rika's mom going to have a talk with Takato or try to make sure he never see's Rika agen please update soon. |
Reviewed By: ZeroFang On: October 09, 2010 22:03 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: Keep up the great work and I have a suggestion: Have our villan get her just deserts by giving her the Connection B two.
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Reviewed By: ZeroFang On: October 09, 2010 22:03 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: Keep up the great work and I have a suggestion: Have our villan get her just deserts by giving her the Connection B two.
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Reviewed By: ZeroFang On: October 09, 2010 22:03 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: Keep up the great work and I have a suggestion: Have our villan get her just deserts by giving her the Connection B two.
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Title: Great story!! Reviewed By: Rey Rey On: September 01, 2010 02:11 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: A great story you are writing here. I especially enjoy the original character and the detail in certain aspects of the story such as clothing color, background aspects and various other things to give the readers an image of what is going on. Hope to see you continue the story. Especially since it's a Takato/Rika my favorite couple in Digimon Tamers. Hope to read the next chapter.
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