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| "True Love: A Priestess and A Hanyou" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: ilona [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2010 01:14 CDT
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so they live in the modern era (since kagome had a prom and was taken to a park) but there are no signs of modern civilization, roads, technology and modern clothing? you would at least think that something would be a little different than 500 years ago. you know, no rogue demons attacking everywhere, people dont just walk around in the countryside, they use cars, bikes etc etc. they dont have to sleep on the floor in caves since villages and towns have motels b&b's etc. also, loving someone after just one night and half a day of knowing them is kind of unreal... the story is written ok, its just your background and your timeline that has me confused..
| Reviewed By: I can dig it On: August 06, 2010 15:45 CDT
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It's a cute story they fell in love too quick though. But I am not mad at it. I get tired of them meeting fighting and then getting together. look forward in reading more.
| Reviewed By: secret35 On: August 05, 2010 17:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AAAHHH the suspence XD!!! This story is incrediable XD! it got my attention Really FAST :P, but i cant wait for the next chapter Please updates as soon as possible PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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