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Reviewed By: . On: October 12, 2012 00:01 EDT
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To lazy to sign in its Cicera and stuff. Love this its so cute! It honestly reminds me of my....... blank. You get the idea lol! It was so warm and fluffy. WAFF all the way and usually I'm like please can we skip the waff but this just made me smile like a little girl. You embodied their relationship and development as characters and I love it. You even reflected it in the consummation of their love. *high five* Great story. I feel like I tell you that every single time! |
Reviewed By: mamosere On: April 19, 2012 07:53 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I also enjoyed reading this story. It feels different than the other stories that you have written that i have read, probably because i think you nailed down the character of Inuyasha and Kagome in this story. It does feel like the "behind the scene" of Inuyasha anime. Looking forward to reading more of your stories. Thanks a lot for writing such amazing stories. |
Title: Tory
Reviewed By: Tory [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2011 13:28 EDT
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I like how you made them both innocent to the act but still hot. ;-) You make me want to write a one-shot between Kouga and Kagome! |
Reviewed By: Sess/Sango On: October 18, 2010 10:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this fic....I like how you really incorporated the reality of a persons first time. How Inuyasha came too fast and Kagome didn't...Not many people do their "first time." Overall great job. I will definately read this one again and I will keep reading your fics. Keep up the good work. I also like how you incorporated their attitudes from the later manga times.
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Reviewed By: LookAtMe [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2010 13:21 EDT
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I can so see that being how it would go down lol. i liked it.
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Reviewed By: ScifiAmy (too lazy to sign in) On: August 23, 2010 22:53 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing!
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Reviewed By: White Luna [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2010 11:23 EDT
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this was sooooooooo cute. Though it wasn't all hot and heavy sexy, it was sweet and loving and really a nice change. I like the real love portrayed here, an the total trust. Muy sexy.
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Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2010 01:21 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Totally enjoyed this story. So much so came back and read it again, hehe. :D Love the characterization you have going on, and the funny part with Inu not going to allow Kags to go to her time for 'that' was great. Was just awesome!
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Reviewed By: Darkil [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2010 04:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Did you have help from Rumiko on this one? I mean, not just at the beginning, cause I don't think I've ever read a story so in character, especially a lemon... this was amazing.
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Reviewed By: King Baka [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2010 08:08 EDT
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I saw it coming, but it was still funny (and typical) that the first thing Inu thought of was Kagome wanting to sleep with Hojo. I also laughed at his contemplation of what Miroku would've done in the same situation. He'd have been naked before Sango finished her proposition, LOL. A small criticism: Inuyasha seemed...a bit too talkative, even for post-manga. It seemed as if he could have said everything in fewer words than he did, which is always a good thing with him. Or maybe it's just a difference in how we see his characterization? It's not a big thing, but I just thought I'd mention it.
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Reviewed By: ktsan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2010 13:01 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
another classic from a fantasic writer. amazing, like usual :D and you made them sound so...natural with the dialogue too hahaha. great job!
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Reviewed By: SelinaA [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2010 04:17 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! This is great. U should do a sequel.
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Reviewed By: soliea0death [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2010 09:40 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful! It's nice that you were able to grasp the way Inuyasha and Kagome's relationship changed in the later part in the manga, compared to before. They both really matured around that time, and took time to understand one another. As for your story: simple, sweet, romantic, amusing, and I sure as Hell wouldn't want to die a virgin either, so their feelings are understandable. As usual, you did an Excellent job Miss Goddess! XD XD XD XD
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Title: wonderful
Reviewed By: einehexe [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2010 02:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Everything from your amazingly polished style of writing down to the feelings that you nailed was perfect. I don't recall having read a more in-character story before, and this is what fascinates me most. The fact that Kagome knows and understands him so deeply, without assuming silly or stupid things anymore (like she used to do) is really true later in the manga, and you truly emphasized that. There are only a few other authors that do that; this is what makes you truly special. And this was a perfect 'first time', too. So very realistic, so innocent, so... InuKag :) Perfect story, perfect open ending, congrats :)
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Title: Hi!!!
Reviewed By: Eiko007 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2010 01:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! you're fic it's sooooooooo sweet!!! i ultra-loved it!!! soooo sweet!!! really!!! the idea was so original... everything went great!!! and i loved the way inuyasha behaved xD so innocenttooo!!! i love when Inuyasha is innocent jijiji xD i loved you're fics always!!! they're always soooo good!!! and this it's one of the cutest sweetest for sure xD I always hope you've get more fics and this made me very happy xD I'll keep checking for you're fics so until you're next fic xD and good luck xD have a great day xD
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