| "New Addiction" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: karika [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2003 06:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You did an amazing job. Im so glad I could finnally get back on this site and finnish reading your fan fic. I just love it even though it had a very sad ending.
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Reviewed By: Mimi, Myself, & Iz. [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2002 03:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter! Some unsettling predicaments have thrown Ai to think of only the highs of what drugs can do and nothing more. Very cute scene at the picnic with Suzie and Mako. It seems Impmon likes Lopmon. (smiles) Now as the story continues, I hate to think what these games have in store for Ai.
Jodi S. |
Reviewed By: Mimi, Myself, & Iz. [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2002 08:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Excellent chapter! I fear for Ai now that she has been tricked and posioned. I hope Chip's words can at least put some sense into her. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Again, the writing is excellent. In other parts, how Impmon/Beelzemon helped Ai with fashion was fun. Makes me wonder how he knew where to look for Ai's clothing when Ai couldn't remember. (grins)
Now on to the next chapter...
Jodi S. |
Reviewed By: Mimi, Myself, & Iz. [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2002 08:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great continuting chapter! The chapter title seems fitting. ...though it could be interpreted in different ways. Being with Perry already sounds like bad news. Nice part with Chip for once tyring to redeem himself and help others. I guess I have to read on to the next chapter! Very captivating story!
Jodi S. |
Reviewed By: AngelWingAsh [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2002 18:53 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Saaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaad............. GONNA READ CHAPTER FOUR!!! |
Reviewed By: CrystalGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2002 11:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
i love chap 3. keep going. i think Ai & chip would be cute together even tho what he did to suzie. |
Reviewed By: TerrierLee On: August 20, 2002 08:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was good, but now ai ha trouble, dont make her go to that party! make impmon get hr to leave or something! |
Reviewed By: AngelWingAsh [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2002 18:26 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm... >:D This is getting goooood. Is this where Ai's gonna.... Hehe... I'm sticking around for Chapter Three! |
Reviewed By: Andy On: August 15, 2002 10:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great I hope you continue to make fan fics like these |
Reviewed By: Mimi, Myself, & Iz. [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2002 11:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah! Wonderful continuation with your story. There were some spelling and grammer errors, but it never seriously distracted the flow of the story. Excellent establishing the other characters of Digimon Tamers to be in your story, one being Juri's brother. A bit violent with Henry and Chip's confrontation, hopefuly last for Chip's sake, but I guess it had to happen.
The story with Ai is wonderfully done. I do hope her recent breakup and the presumably, to her, the dwindling friendship with Suzie doesn't cause her to be needlessly hurt. Hints in the title? Well, I know Kazu can help!
Again, wonderfully done story!
Jodi S. |
Reviewed By: AngelWingAsh [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2002 18:08 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ai's next? This is gonna be good...
Very nice start for a sequel!! I'll stick around for Chapter Two! |
Reviewed By: Raptor [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2002 16:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
It's a good start! So it's about Ai now? What going to happen next? I'm interested... |
