| "Mayakashi" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2010 02:23 EST
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All done now is it?.... and what an ending it was from killing her father to destroying Enma...there was so much fighting it was delicious... and when Kagome went all Celestial being on is A** I was all like oh ya take that you JERK!... and how you ended it just like you ended the last one her being pregnant an all, though I wander if Kagome will ever go through the well again, you never did say that she had lost that ability. So with this new problem that has arised I can't help ask if your going to wright another sequel to this story, may be at the end of this one Kagome would end up being a goddess regardless of her choice in this one...hehe I just kidding, great story I had fun reading it thank you for writing it!............Nyuka |
Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2010 23:52 EDT
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and here I thought Bakuya was on Kagome side...at least a little...this really does suck I thought that you where going to give Kagome a break...lol.... Kagome's date seemed to end in a bang though... I curious what Enma is up to I get the feeling of a giant misunderstanding or something....I wander if Kagome could take Enma's job now that would be interesting...hehe..........till next time ..............Nyuka
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2010 01:36 EDT
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So Kurama had planned for a date....I guess that makes sense with what he said.....Sota seems to be getting stronger...which is cool bye the way I always hate it when Sota gets left out of the story...he's got the same blood as Kagome and should have the potential to be just as powerful in my book..........Something is going to go down at Genki's next chapter hu....But they will be fine Sota can take care of himself now...right? well I will just have to see..............Nyuka
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2010 21:26 EDT
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What exactly did Kurama whisper into Kagome's ear...what are they planning....a harmless prank or a killing spree...time will tell cause it take time to write a story...lol...ok I know corny but I feel that way at the moment but great chapter Kagome is amazing as always...XD..............Nyuka
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2010 01:19 EDT
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The romance, in my opinion, seems to be going a relevantly even pace though I do feel a bit of tension between the two....and Kagome's Papa lives though he more or less demanded that she kill him and he still plays the part of the villain I still hope that he really is just Playing the part and isn't actuarially evil but then again I always like things wrapped in a nice pretty bow, even though life is exactly like that....Love the story..........Nyuka
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2010 17:48 EDT
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refugee's, does that mean that soul society is split...those who support Kagome and those who don't? All of spirit world? Wow wouldn't that be a twist...but if it wasn't that what could it be? Their refugee's normally someone becomes a refugee if their home is destroyed or taken over buy an enemy, so which is it I wonder....It's funny how its almost as if Kagome and Kurama where always together the relationship seem seamless...lol....looking forward to what that statement meant...........Nyuka
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2010 00:09 EDT
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Positive!!! lol so Kagome lost part of her soul....again....that has to suck....but when you said she lost it made me think that its with her father further proof of my crazy theory...lol....it would so work that the part of her that allows her to grow would be with her father....training in some way no?...lol but seriously Kagome is in trouble and I have yet to see you giver her a break but I will watch and see......Nyuka
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2010 22:06 EDT
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What Kurama said....could I have been right? That would be so cool...but it would also suck for Kagome...cause she kill her poppy and all.....Ya know It's funny her poppy even pointed her in the direction of the tournament and said she would have been a good candidate.....I don't know if I was right but I would laugh If I was and be giddy for some unknown reason...I love your quick updates it fills my days with happiness............BWY Yomi is great...lol..............Nyuka
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2010 00:40 EDT
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OOOOH where will Kurama have Kagome stay I wander....lol............I love this story by the way.... I think its sad that Kagome lost her Job as Captain and it sucks that her squad has to suffer the lose of another Captain becoming a "trader" ....which makes me think a little bit what if Kagome's father was mixed up in a major misunderstanding....not saying he was but think about it for a second....Kagome's father was trying to kill Enma, that was his big bad goal..no? So in some way he was trying to help Kagome....faking his death because he knew her fate as the Shikon Jewels guardian any father would be pissed right? Ok and there is also the fact that he's a Shikgame and knew that if he kill Kagome's family they really wouldn't be gone, they would end up in soul society.....Talking evil like to her could have been his way of making her stronger so she could defender herself against Enma....like in Naruto how Itachi did to Sasuke...hope it didn't spoil anything if you follow that series and if you don't like sorry again for bring it up...^-^' .....So I guess I'm saying that even though alot of bad things happened it slightly possible that Kagome's dad wasn't as evil as he perceived himself to be... XD..............want to read more............Nyuka
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2010 02:20 EDT
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oh wow, Did Enma really to that to Kagome's little one? That is so wrong....hehe funny out of all the things that amazed me while reading this that is what I comment on first...hehe... is Kagome really going to confront him doesn't she have to deal with the A and S class demons that escaped in to human world? And now that Inuyasha, Kagome's poppy and Aizan are now dead who is the big baddy? Is the story almost over. And what of the little ones destiny what will be in her future....Kagome and Kurama's? I would like to know...XD....thankyou for writing..........Nyuka
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Reviewed By: alyssa james [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2010 17:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally, a good crossover fanfic! Most crossovers aren't the best because many of the characters are too OOC for my liking, but yours remind me of the real ones! Hope you update soo ;)
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2010 17:00 EDT
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oh crap, If Kagome says anything she is dead....and they want answers....and Uryuu, I never hated the guy but I never felt like he belonged with Kagome the way she is now....she is just to strong.....maybe thats why he cheated to get out of his relationship with her....its a stretch but I don't like to think of him as the bad guy..... So I wander if Enma will make an exseption with all the people figuring things out on their own...XD.........I hope u update soon.......Nyuka
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