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| "Want To Be Your Slave" Reviews/Comments [ 34 ] | | Pages (3): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 ] | Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2010 18:54 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm not going to kill you! I liked the way you ended that cliffhanger. Clearly, Sesshoumaru's previous worries that he had been trying to dismiss, that Inuyasha's hanyou-self and human-self could possibly be the same person, have overridden his doubts and denials. He wants his puppy back, and even if the human child was not his puppy, he couldn't very well let him die, now could he? I am really looking forward to the next chapter, which I'm sure will involve Sesshoumaru rushing to Inuyasha's aid in some fashion or another. I am mentally squee-ing in preparation for the moment when human-Inuyasha opens hazy eyes and murmurs "Sesshoumaru-sama?" or what have you. Let the guilt begin! On a side note, I like that you have Sesshoumaru making the ridiculously inaccurate assumption that Inuyasha's hanyou and human personas are different and independent from one another. You could've just as easily had him merely be disgusted with the fact that Inuyasha turns human and been done with it, but prejudice like that would've been harder to overcome. With the way you are portraying Sesshoumaru, I get the distinct impression that once he realizes that Inuyasha is the same person even during his human night, he won't be so quick to mistreat him. There was also that brief "So…it is true…" moment of his thoughts, so the blame cannot be placed entirely on Inuyasha's shoulders for having failed to reveal his secret to his master. Sesshoumaru had already heard about it! Anyway, great update, and now I'm super looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the good work!
| Reviewed By: dreamer789 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2010 11:38 EDT
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VERY GOOD SO FAR! I cant believe that Sesshomaru is all disgusted now that he knows Inu turn human for a night. Please update soon i cant wait to find out what happens next!!!
| Reviewed By: kjpanny [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2010 00:28 EDT
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I usually dont read yaoi stories but I've made an exception for u cuz this is awesome! Update quickly
| Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2010 14:30 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was just starting to wonder if Inuyasha didn't have his transformation in his universe. What a cliff hanger! Really looking forward to your next updates.
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