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| "Moonlight through the Broken Ice" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: EkLiPsE [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2011 04:31 EDT
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PLEASE UPDTAE SOON! | Reviewed By: Kags521 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2010 00:48 EDT
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WOW! This is really great. I think the only problem you have is just some of your words get stuck together like you forgot to space them. But after that, I have bad gramar too that I'm trying to fix, so yea, your story is wonderful so far and I really hope you update soon.
| Reviewed By: alyssa james [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2010 11:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a nice fanfic! Sess/Kag goodness, everyone's in character, and I could believe that it would happen in an actual few episodes of Inuyasha. Even your grammar isn't terrible, it's actually pretty good. Good luck, can't wait to see what happens next! ~Peace~
| Reviewed By: sexy_capricorn [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2010 13:16 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so glad I found this fic. Recently, I've been slightly obsessed with Sess/Kag pairings.(Mainly because Sessh is becoming more and more appealing) I haven't tried my hand at it myself, but I enjoy reading them. I also like how in character everybody is. Usually, I tend to lean towards more OOC and with that you kind of lose InuYasha characters personalities as Rumiko created them. So, this is really refreshing. I'm surprised no one has reviewed this story already. It's amazing! Anyway, I'm enjoying and I wish you luck and prosperity.
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