| "Kiss Me Goodbye" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: Angelica (NSI) On: June 27, 2011 01:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Reading it again, as promised. Still awesome! |
Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2010 02:17 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Beautifully done final chapter. I definitely don't think you needed to drag it out any further with wedding details and whatnot. I do think the little mini-epilogue at the very end there was a nice touch. All in all, a truly wonderful story!
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Reviewed By: AvidRabid [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2010 22:59 EDT
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True to form it was a wonderful finish. But really, your writting is always wonderful.
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2010 21:11 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful second chapter! I agree, that was way too good of a cliffhanger to pass up. Looking forward to the third installment, but of course take however long you need to make sure it's perfect. Just don't stick it on the back burner and forget about it! When I say Update ASAP, I mean literally as soon as possible...if it's not finished yet well then it's not possible yet, is it? Haste makes waste, and all those other good expressions. Still, I shall remain aptly glued to the edge of my seat until chapter 3's arrival! :-)
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Reviewed By: inugirl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2010 17:05 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wowzers! This fic is amazingly written. I love the angsty bits, my heart aches for Kagome when I read it. I absolutely love/hate the cliffie you have made. Excellent ending to the chapter, even though I am on the edge of my seat with excitement! Take your time in updating, just please dont forget about this! It is too beautiful to abandon ^_^
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Reviewed By: oniguts On: October 06, 2010 22:08 EDT
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Oh holy shikon! What has Kagome done? Honestly I too was upset when the manga just glossed over Kagome's feelings about Kikyo and Inuyasha. That triangle was never resolved. It truly was a cop out to kill Kikyo, Inuyasha never really was able to decide who he truly wanted. Kagome deserved better than that.
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Reviewed By: kmn1829 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2010 17:36 EDT
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I like the emotions, they're relatable and the make sense given the current situation that Kagome, Inuyasha and the gang are in. Inuyasha needs to have that much needed talk with Kagome and he needs to do that soon. I like how you messed with her powers aswell because not a lot of people do. Some writers just make her automatically know how to use her powers at full strength and like that you made it an issue. Please update soon because I can't wait.
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Reviewed By: Rainstorm61879(NSI) On: September 25, 2010 01:23 EDT
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ooh dark sad tormented i like it the emotions are so thick and real. YOur writing is as always amazing. I hope to see more chapters to this story.
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2010 03:25 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful start. I'm really looking forward to the second, and possibly also third chapter, depending on how this story develops in your mind. Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: raven2010 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2010 00:37 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your an amazing writer and this story is beautiful. I saw that episode where Kikyo died and when Inuyasha said he wanted to protect Kikyo forever I felt bad for Kagome for the hurt that was sad. This fic really has a great feel to it keep up the good work" (^_^)
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