| "Blind Amazon" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Ranchan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2003 02:56 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
great fic plz plz update, you cant just leave me hangin here :) though, plz give Rinse back her vision..
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Reviewed By: Noneed4nick On: September 26, 2002 19:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like your story thus far... but please.. format your story.. i had a very hard time reading your story =( |
Reviewed By: Michael H [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2002 18:01 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I realy like your story please update soon. |
Reviewed By: fantasy_raan On: August 26, 2002 10:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
hmm is it just me or do parts seem to be missing nice story might wanna fix it up a bit |
Reviewed By: Frederick Herriot On: August 09, 2002 22:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
Could you please go through this story again to make sure the paragraph breaks are more solid. When I tried to read this, I got cross-eyed because it seemed like one big run-on paragraph. |
Reviewed By: jmm44 On: August 06, 2002 18:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice story! I would like to see more. Needs to be edited, change to one font instead of two and add paragragh breaks would make easier to read. |
