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 Title: Nice
Reviewed By: Devouring Flame  On: September 16, 2011 08:38 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed the way you took the character's personalities and expanded upon them for bedroom play. I admit i was kind of hoping for some Mai, zuko, tylee action but, you argument made sense. Loved the writing style and they way you brought facts from Asian cultures to elaborate and add realistic aspects to it. Minus that one small disappointment. I Loved your story.

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