Reviewed By: Priest [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2013 22:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was a good start on a story it is a shame you haven't updated it in some time...but maybe you could make your chapters a bit longer with some more back story or details still a good story idea. |
