| "The Night of No Regrets" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
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Reviewed By: SSVegeta5 On: August 13, 2002 14:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man i loved this fic.I read Bra and Goten fics all the time but WOW this one is my all time favorite.Man I can't wait till you continue.Man i loved it.You are awsome. |
Reviewed By: Pheonix On: August 12, 2002 15:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was very cool, if only my bro was as considerate! i can't wait to see the next issue! |
Reviewed By: Pheonix On: August 12, 2002 15:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story was so kick ass. i mean it was just so spiffy! i was blown away, because i have known the author for a long time and-damn! i never knew she could write like this. Although she needs to re-read before submission for any editorial mistakes-lol! but Damn! |
Reviewed By: silvershadow On: August 11, 2002 22:28 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The fic is going well i think even though the mystery is gone. That's what made the first chap so great |
Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2002 21:40 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
lol, I never realized there weren't that many Goten/Bra stories ... this one's my first. ^_^
I admit, I'm not much of a Trunks/Pan fan, so when I started reading this I believed they'd be the couple just to piss me off. j/k
The first chapter of this fic was QUITE addictive. (hehhehheh) The way you NEVER told who the characters were was SUCH a hook. I need more of that coolenss!! Um ... the ideas sound pretty good. The Trunks talking to Goten and Pan talking to Bra idea is predictable and should EVENtually be written. But ... maybe Bulma walking in on them would be a little TOO much (although it sounds fun;). The crumpled up towel inquisition sounds funny.
Btw, now that I know Pan's a Garbage fan I actually think she's pretty cool. Push it ROCKS!! Oh wait, you said that was Static X. LMAO ... I feel so uncool. :(
Write more on this fic, because it's actually quite good. But ... I need my couples to overcome obstacles/struggles. SOMEthing bad's got to happen, right? sheesh, I'm such a drama monguer ... ^_~ |
Reviewed By: silvershadow On: August 08, 2002 22:25 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm glad Trunks didn't kill Goten, but it was classic when Pan slugged him? As a Trunks and Pan fac i forgive you for the comment, but you should make it up to all of us some how.
I think Goten and Bra need some alone time.
Hope you update soon. |
Reviewed By: voidsenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2002 18:41 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
....WOW.... That was not what I was expectiong. I mean it was a great story but the people that I thought it was going to be were different from who you piced. I was expecting it to be Trunks and Pan but I was shocked to find out that it was one of my other fav. couples.... *finnaly snaps out of daze* Sooooooooo yeah!!!!! I loved it!!!!!!!!!!! If ya feel like going on I totaly engourage it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: silvershadow On: August 05, 2002 19:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it I love it! especially they way you didn't tell who it was until the end although there were some good clues! Great job for a first time fic! I hope there will be another chapter telling how the aftermath played out.
If not you should write similar fics with different couples.
All in all great job and mad props! |
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