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| "Little Haunted Maze of Horrors" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] | Reviewed By: ananova [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2010 16:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it. Thanks for sharing another halloween story with us. I especially liked Inuyasha's trip through the maze and his trying to convince himself he wasn't scared. I also enjoyed the slight misunderstanding where Kagome and her family thought Inuyasha understood about the holiday but he had actually tuned out the explanation. That is so in character for him to do. Thanks for sharing.
| Reviewed By: King Baka [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2010 22:12 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, as usual I find myself with a lot to say, wishing that mediaminer allowed me to split my review into paragraphs. Now wouldn't that make it look nicer than a big block of rambling?! Overall, I loved this story. I was a little iffy on a few minor details, but I honestly don't even remember what they were. You shifted seamlessly between amusing and touching several times. I laughed more than a few times, especially about Inuyasha's adventure in the maze, his self-deception, and his crazed jealousy. Then there was the whole thing with the high school boys that cracked me up because you made them seem so stupid and immature, but some of the things they said were genuinely funny (for example, "it was all a plot to make us read"). It was also amusing how much Inuyasha enjoyed sneaking up on and scaring people (and barking at little cat-girls,LOL). The general theme was wonderful, that Inuyasha needed to let himself have a good time. Once he did, his relationship with Kagome became much clearer. The romance at the end was a little quick, but it didn't seem forced. You knew where to stop so things didn't get OOC. I was also impressed at your descriptions of the Halloween elements of the story, like Kagome's costume, the haunted maze, and the behavior of the student volunteers. You obviously put a lot of effort into those details, and the story wouldn't have been the same without them. Ok, I'll stop now. Thanks for giving me a couple highly enjoyable hours.
| Title: A fave
Reviewed By: J Luc Pitard [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2010 09:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked this story. The haunted house, the teenage boys needing a comeuppance, all of it was wonderful. Oh, and the love? Yeah, I liked how you wove that in as well.
| Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2010 04:20 CDT
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Wonderful, fun story. I really enjoyed this, very nice!
| Title: Glad you Wrote it!
Reviewed By: kanna37 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2010 22:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can truly say you are a goddess of the makeup persuasion, lol, because you described it in such detail, I was totally impressed! I really enjoyed this one... Amber
| Reviewed By: Kawa-Misuterii [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2010 20:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVED this! I have to say, my favorite part was when Kagome managed to spook him, despite InuYasha having a bit of a panic attack, haha! This was just great. You really captured the Halloween spirit here. I play the saxophone in a marching band, and tomorrow we're doing a Halloween parade Thriller-style. I think I'll try Kagome's zombie-fying method instead of just painting on some green skin like I planned. Thanks for writing this!
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