Reviewed By: MaroonWolf18 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2010 01:42 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey. I actually liked this. Why did you only type one chapter? It was very nice. I love your style of writing and the dialogue is great! Was this a one-shot gut for possible attention to inspire you to write MORE than "one friggin' chapter". Lol.... Well, if you do decide to add another chapter, I'll know, because I have added you to my favorites. I have written a few things as well. If you like the anime called InuYasha, there is a five chapter short story I made called "Full Moon Wedding"... There will more chapters to that later... there's an assasin related one. Then there is my third and final, for now, my "baby"... Tattered Soul... It's long, and very VERY dark and disturbing, but great to read and write! Hope to see or hear from ya soon. Thanks for this short story, for now. It's was actually very nice. Take Care!! --Amanda/MaroonWolf18 |
