| "In Deep Woods" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2011 19:35 EDT
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poor inuyasha --love the reactions. he's a pretty easygoing and forgiving guy. looks like he's going to give trace a chance and forgive fenn. -- and they all lived happily ever after ^_^ ♥ |
Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2011 18:20 EDT
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one wonders why they couldn't have absorbed the energy from kagome's barrier? -- seems like inuyasha may have grown up a little in all that time --although he's still all spit and vinegar. |
Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2011 13:39 EDT
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guy has probably never worked for anything in his life so this is hopefully going to have him appreciating megumi even more. -- inuyasha's going to really pissed at everyone for not telling him right away --just waiting for the fireworks. ♥ |
Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2011 20:46 EDT
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somehow inuyasha will NOT like these developments and will probably hate and never trust fenn again. lol --gin |
Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2011 20:54 EST
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so glad that kazuki got his priorities straight-- one can only wonder how this is going to all turn out. -- you know, i have only read one other 'next generation' story and that was terri botta's sequel to 'lucky ones' ('coyote child' or something, i don't remember the title at the moment) and this says a lot for what i feel about your writing -- ♥ |
Reviewed By: Geshron Tyler [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2011 07:35 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the few Inuyasha fics that builds upon time travelling, other than the "normal" route through the well. I find Trace and Fin's motivation quite interesting, and the way their nature's have changed over the centuries. It looks like the "real" story will be coming out in the near future. Thanks for the chapter. |
Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2011 20:18 EST
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*singing 'all you need is love'* http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=r4p8qxGbpOk --now what's going to happen with kazuki and his revenge because it's not going to bring back his first wife and will only mange to hurt himself if trace is stronger or either way hurt megumi... ♥ |
Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2011 20:13 EST
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reasons -- i don't really understand what made fenn believe that trace could be trusted or that he'd changed his mind about eliminating inuyasha and everything. the risk would have been really great. i understand how the fact that he was really limited in his traveling space with no time travel but sometimes there's things that destroy a man worse than his physical death. kill or hurt the people he loves would be more effective. *nods!nods* yes i'm looking forward to fenn's explanation. gin ♥ |
Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2011 22:22 EST
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wow, this could change so many things. *shakes head* i don't think the two could become friends. now that it's pretty much become public knowledge that trace isn't incarcerated anymore they're going to want to know why fenn let him out. lots of stuff hitting the fan... ♥ |
Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2011 07:24 EST
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i guess he didn't have to worry about trace hurting megumi or her family because he could read trace and he had taken the time travel knowledge from him and from megumi? --too lazy to go back and read it over. how does fenn explain/justify that he had freed trace without inuyasha going ballistic over the fact, including the risk factor? seems like he's in a pretty pickle. wouldn't there be all sorts of microorganisms in the cave --fungus, insects, etc. that he could use (i understand that trace would have absorbed much of it but caves are damp and kagome would have introduced more organisms when she visited)? ♥ |
Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2011 10:08 EST
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lets hope he can rehabilitate and all of the sacrifices weren't in vain --or fenn will have to totally eliminate him. --sorry, my pc broke, but hopefully i'm back. ♥ |
Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2010 23:00 EST
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i'm wondering if trace learned anything or is he still hell bent on his previous course. i'm also wondering if megumi is going to be alright. ~gin |
Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2010 01:05 EDT
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a great series -- http://www.animeseason.com/rurouni-kenshin-episode-1/ -- and the manga -- http://view.thespectrum.net/series/rurouni-kenshin-volume-01.html --if you're interested, i figured you would enjoy. ♥
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2010 00:58 EDT
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i think i have stated before that i'm not particularly into reading stories containing primarily OCs but somehow i have become attached to these --or used to them or something. one wonders how fenn is going to fix things. ♥
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