| "teas little secrets" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] |
Title: Teas Little Secrets
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2005 02:23 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: JoeyWheeler2004 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2005 12:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok this was like the WORST FIC I HAVE EVER READ! you have no idea how to write a "lemon" and your skills on telling who said what are a definite minimum. plus the pairing sux. sorry, but im just telling you how it is
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Title: You SUCK!
Reviewed By: A dissatisfied fucking customer On: November 05, 2004 19:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
What the FUCK were you thinking?! This story absolutely REEKS OF WET ASS!!! Ever heard of using ONE GODDAMN PERIOD?!?!?!?! SHIT! I felt my brain exploding from the massive incompetence of your fucking writing capabilities. Why do you even BOTHER! For chrissakes, author, we want details! I mean, what the fuck? Why does Kaiba keep a fucking wedding ring under his PILLOW!!!??? Why in blue hell does Kaiba fucking give his son his deck before going to a FUCKING GODDAMNED-ALL-TO-HELL TOURNAMENT!? KAIBA-TWO!? WHY NOT "JUNIOR" OR FUCKING "THE SECOND"!? WHy TWO!?!?!? And don't get me started on the shit grammar. I had to read the motherfucker three times just to understand what the hell was going on. Everything sucks. The grammar, the undetailed lemon, the plot (WHAT FUCKING PLOT?!), and just basically everything about this shitty-assed period-juice puddle you so stupidly call a "Fanfic".
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Reviewed By: Dark Lady On: April 05, 2003 16:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's pretty good...and I gave you alot for originality because Kaiba and Tea don't match. o_O;; Kaiba is too sexy for her. ^^; |
Reviewed By: Mr. MiSTer [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2003 09:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a LOVELY monument to shitty fanfiction! OH the MST I shall make! *Rubs his hands together and cackles with insane glee* Write some more! I just love terrible fanfiction and you basically re-defined the entire genre! I better go find this "yugi's little secrets"... it might be almost as awful as this.
Seriously dude, I could work for months and not come up with anything as wonderfully painful as this. Do you even speak english? I suspect you might be using monkeys-and-keyboard based entropy physics to do this... well, whatever your secret, keep up the shitty work! I'm off to write the MST! |
Reviewed By: slayer77 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2003 19:48 CST
Comment/Review:
its an really good fic, really touching,(change the rating to"R" |
Reviewed By: GOODwriter123456 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2002 20:11 CST
Comment/Review:
What the figgit? That's all?! noooooooooooooo such a good story toooooo |
Reviewed By: Pandapants182 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2002 13:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
I, myself, am a Yugi's Little Secrets fan. Wingzero(YLS author) even put in her fanfic how you got her idea.
You could at least put a dif title on it. I mean, it's quite obvious. Other than that, it was good. I don't know where Seto would get his wedding ring in such a short time but, he did.
Well, don't listen to me if you don't want to, I'm a Seto+Joey fan. I'm one of those peoples that think Tea should be smashed into itty witty pieces. -_-0 I am scary.... |
Reviewed By: Bakura's_gurl On: October 26, 2002 19:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow *cries* that was sad but very touching.that's so cute.please write more romance stories like this.
Bakura's_Gurl |
Reviewed By: Bakura's_Gurl On: October 26, 2002 20:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow that second chapter was even better! |
Reviewed By: CCSINJAPAN On: September 07, 2002 19:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed it!!! I totally wept when they said Kaiba died and they had only been married 18 years!!! I cried so hard!! Well back to the subject of the fic, some people gave you bad reviews, but I stll LOVED it!! Well I am a Seto/Tea fan, but I also like Yugi/Tea, but Seto/Tea seem so perfect!! Please write more!!! |
Reviewed By: cheeser On: August 11, 2002 16:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Comment/Review:
hey i think u should at leat give credit or sumthin 2 yugi's lil secrets i mean COME ON! |
Reviewed By: Asahi Taiga On: August 10, 2002 00:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have rated it as so, because this is based on a fic I read on Fanfiction.net. It is called Yugi's Little Secret and was written long before yours. I have read it, and you have copied a few ideas and a plot from the fic, changed the title, and claimed it as your own. By claiming it, you have basically pushed the original author out of the light for your own gain. |
Reviewed By: lil leslie On: August 07, 2002 13:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
overall, it was pretty good, but u kinda need to work on your spelling. reminded me of a lemon but still good. |
Reviewed By: BakurazAngel On: August 07, 2002 13:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
um... interesting. you don't see many tea/kaiba fics lol. definately creative, but i think your rating's a little iffy. looks like a lemon to me:) um... ur a good writer, with an interesting sense of what you're going for, but overall, pretty decent. |
Reviewed By: RedEyeDragon2478 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2002 11:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dude your good but why are there two of the same chapter forget i said that anyways keep up the good work |
Reviewed By: Squall'sScar [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2002 10:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was beautiful. I hope the next chapter is just as good!! I LOVE SETO KAIBA!!! |
