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| "Elemental Eyes: Rising Winds" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: jumperjacket [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2011 08:18 EDT
Comment/Review:
Sorry this one took me so long, I've had a lot of stuff hapeening lately, is this chapter not done, because it kinda ended ubruptly. As far as now, I see a promising moment coming up, though I was kind of let down when it ended. I want to know how this all finished, don't leave me hanging okay. | Title: Dude
Reviewed By: jumperjacket [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2011 08:45 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I gotta admit, I wasn't expecting an original story, but that makes this all the better. I like how you set this up, and this shade guy seems to be very interesting as villain, I really want to see where this goes from here, you've got an good story here, I want to know what happens with Erich. And also, you're pretty good at making fights scenes, maybe even better than me. |
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