| "My Enemy, My Friend" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: GLily On: May 11, 2011 09:19 EDT
Comment/Review:
I am really enjoying this story so far, but only issue is that in Chapter 10, it started out by saying 'Two months later' and in chapter 11 it also started out with 'Two months later'... This means that it has been 4 months since she left her group, and they have yet to find her even though they were only one day behind when she ran away? Other than the timeline being a little weird, it is a great story, and I hope you update soon. :-) |
Reviewed By: sarah86 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2011 06:45 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love it like always,can't wait tell you next update. |
Reviewed By: Sarah1986 On: February 03, 2011 22:04 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
another grate chapter.i really liked the fight and the bird demon.can't wait to see what kagome has to say when wakes to find she had to be saved by a man once more.poor girl lol |
Reviewed By: Sarah1986 On: January 27, 2011 21:18 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story it's coming alone really nicely.I like how we now see what is going on else ware now.I kind of feel bad cuz i'm a huge Inuyasha fan...But i find i like him as the bad guy you just want to hate (cuz you know he would so do that given the chance).Well can't wait to see what you have for us next time. |
Reviewed By: sarah1986 On: January 22, 2011 04:26 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is going to be a good story i can't wait to see(read) what happens when inuyasha find out who kagome is hanging around.don't make use wait to long for the chapter. |
