"A Spell of Loneliness, Love, Lies, Longing & Life" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: Maylar On: June 19, 2003 22:38 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: LOVE IT UPDATE SOON!!!! |
Reviewed By: Maylar On: June 19, 2003 15:40 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: YOUR STORY ROCKS SO FAR!!!!! I'LL KEEP READING AND HOPE IT ONLY GETS BETTER!!! |
Reviewed By: Tenmei Meoih [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2003 12:19 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Oh my god I love your writing. You just made me a life long fan... Please do us all a favor and kill bulma... Bulma = evil. |
Reviewed By: Skayda [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2002 12:16 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: I will be honest with you, I noticed a lot of spelling and grammar mistakes, but hey, none of us are immune to the typo demon, so that is forgivable. Especially since you've given us such and awesome, fun, hang-onto-the-edge-of-you-seats-and-giggle-with-pleasure kinda story! Poor Destiny and Alex! I hope they get what thier hearts desire and find happiness. Please update this soon! And read my stuff, please, please! I love Piccolo, too! Hehe... :D |
Reviewed By: Nick On: November 10, 2002 22:13 CST Comment/Review: Hello I like this story it puts colour in my day
*grins stupidly drooling on himself* |
Reviewed By: Ezpeanza On: November 10, 2002 22:12 CST Comment/Review: I'za scatter brain o_O
Me like a this story me hope a you keep writing this story cos might make sane o.O
Newayz have fun!!!! |
Reviewed By: Hybrid On: November 10, 2002 22:10 CST Comment/Review: Yay you updated!! I hate bulma I hope she dies a horibbly painful death!! >:) Poor Destiny :/
Keep writing!!! |
Reviewed By: AinaYZababe On: October 13, 2002 21:49 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: This is pretty funny. I really enjoy reading it. keep it up! |
Reviewed By: Kalia_Son [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2002 01:44 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: You really have something going here, you seem to know alot about spells and such, are you a fellow witch or something. Anyways, hurry up with the next chapter, I really like this story! |