Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2011 08:17 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww...this one-shot was so sweet! And very in-character, too. Kagome's depression wasn't over done which is often the case. I found her emotions very realistic for the canon setting. Despite her feelings on the matter, it was clear she had every intention to keep on keeping on; she was just a little down, which was to be expected under the circumstances. I think you pulled this off beautifully. And Inuyasha's character was flawless as well, swallowing his pride to say what he knew needed to be said, without being overly emotional. I didn't even notice any typos or anything, so if there were any I was obviously too into the story to be bothered by it. All in all this little one-shot was perfect, in my opinion. Keep up the awesome work! |
