| "Of The Broken" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: angelwolf21 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2013 19:55 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoy it,I like this pairing Hiei/Kagome/Kurama, update soon please |
Reviewed By: KEdakumi On: February 01, 2012 22:33 EST
Comment/Review:
It's a good start. Love the large multi-pairing you are thinking of. It may be difficult, like you said, but ohhhh the fun. :) I can't wait to see where you take this. |
Reviewed By: Kanna598 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2011 13:41 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I like the idea of Sesshoumaru/Kagome/Hiei/Kurama. |
Reviewed By: vampire_rose91 On: January 27, 2011 21:40 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i would like to see a kagome/sesshomaru/ hiei/ kurama together cause there are hardly any of them and i think it would be the best option so no one is left out |
Reviewed By: KEdakumi On: January 24, 2011 05:50 EST
Comment/Review:
You have a good start. My only suggestion would be to watch how you break apart your lines, starting new paragraphs and such. My understanding is generally that if a new person talks, that should be part of a new paragraph. Anything else could blend together and be confusing to read. Can't wait to see more! I always like the multiple pairings. Kurama/Kagome/Hiei and maybe add Sess to the mix. It makes it a bit more challenging to write, but the dynamics of the relationships can be fun to read. :) Please update soon! |
