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| "Night Stalker" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2011 16:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Am really liking your story, I really am, but may I suggest a beta. With the overlapping of conversion between characters it's just a bit hard to read and keep up with who be whom at times. It is a good story, just a hard to read one. So please, don't take what I say as any flames, cause they are not. Till next time, update when ya can! ;) | Title: more ples
Reviewed By: watersongz On: June 06, 2011 13:22 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this so far please more moree more!!!! | Reviewed By: secret35 On: June 01, 2011 23:37 EDT
Comment/Review:
So far im really hooked into the story. I hop next chapter comes out soon. and if not a problem can you seperate the quotes, it's a little hard to read :), but overall good story line XD and keep up the good work secret | Reviewed By: AvidRabid [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2011 22:41 EST
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It seems really interesting but two things before I'm willing to get absorbed. You need to edit spelling errors something fierce, and the chapters need to be at least twice as long. |
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