| "Virulence" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: 13lackangel1 On: July 09, 2011 18:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story!! I'm abit sad that inuyasha sees kikyo in kagome. Not because I don't like kikyo she's cool but they're completely different people. anyway this is such a good story I can't wait for ur next update!! Have a great day =) |
Title: hmm
Reviewed By: oHshippo! On: July 07, 2011 11:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
So i like the whole inuyasha is a hitman plot, buh i dnt like him lying to kagome. an the fact tht kagome is 15 an he's 22 doesnt sit well with me either. an theres some things that dont work out. lik how kagome cut an dyed her hair buh wen she an inuyasha shared a bed an he groped her in her sleep he talked about her long silky hair, buh in the previous chapter she cut her hair. he also thinks she looks like kikyo but why would she look like kikyo with short brown hair if kikyo has long black hair? jus saying, buh a good fanfic so far its interesting except for the things i mentioned above. |
Reviewed By: xFinalActsGirlx On: July 04, 2011 19:39 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY! Two whole hapters! I loved them, very enjoyable, hope to see another update soon! :) |
Title: Fun read
Reviewed By: J Luc Pitard [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2011 13:58 EDT
Comment/Review:
Interesting situation. It feels like Stockholm Syndrome's working in reverse, with Inuyasha falling for Kagome. Not that it would take much of a push for her, but he's the grown up and understands what he's feeling... sort of. |
Reviewed By: xFinalActsGirlx On: April 28, 2011 21:58 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update soon please! This is the first time I've read a story with this type of plot! I really enjoy it, obviously there is alot of mystery behind this story and I cant wait to see it unravel before my eyes! |
Title: sweet
Reviewed By: PixieDust010 On: February 21, 2011 21:17 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, i love this fic. pretty please update soon. |
Reviewed By: secret35 On: January 28, 2011 07:00 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! im the first to review XD! I have to say this story is one of a kind! its so different! I love it XD I hope you update soon, and i love the fact that inu was just about to slit her throat. it gave me chills!!! i actually thought he was going to do something lol. anyway i really hope you update!! until next time ja ne |
