| "Attempt at the Tempest" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: Fanfactor [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2011 20:01 EST
Comment/Review:
Very interesting story and I do really enjoy your premise. I hope that you wil continue and to develop the characters more so they don't becom Mary Sueish. |
Title: Love it!!
Reviewed By: Silver Moon Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2011 17:04 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love this so far! It's so fitting for Miroku to work in a porn store lol!! I don't like that Inuyasha is with Kikyou though... I'm an Inu/Kag fan :D Will Kagome begin to date Kouga as well? Hope to see another chapter soon! |
