"To Blot out the Sun" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: oniguts On: April 12, 2011 22:24 EDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This is exellent. Inuyasha is finally seeing Kagome for the worthy woman that she is. Truthfully he is the one who is not worthy of her. I just bet that Kikyo is some sort of spy sent to ruin his kingdom. |
Reviewed By: lee lee On: March 20, 2011 10:24 EDT Comment/Review: This story is hardcore. Its actually breaking my heart. :( Its a powerful story. |
Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2011 10:07 EDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Awww...cute update. I'm really liking this story so far. Good job! |
Reviewed By: secret35 On: March 20, 2011 01:50 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: aaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwww! cute!!!!! this story is getting along beautifully XD! it's so cute! well even if thier relationship is now starting to change :P I can't wait for the next one keep up the good work! we are all rooting for you XD |
Reviewed By: smpnst [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2011 13:51 EST Comment/Review: good job! I love the story, keep updating please! |
Reviewed By: secret35 On: March 02, 2011 13:39 EST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: YEAH!!!!! you updated! i love sweet and tender moments. eventhough inu keeps denying he would ever be in love with Kagome, right? right! lol i just really love the new spin of things its incrediable and i can't wait for the next chapter XD and another thing. the chapters are long HURRAY FOR LONG CHAPTERS lol keep up the good work XD |
Reviewed By: loulou4729 *not signed in* On: March 02, 2011 07:31 EST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Ok, you got my attention. I did pass by this before finally clicking and reading. Really nice start. I look forward to reading more. :) |
Reviewed By: MiakaRyo [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2011 22:38 EST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I really love this story. You are going a great job bringing a new look to the world of Inuyasha. I have had a really hard time finding a fanfic that I have really enjoyed. This story has became one of my new favorites. Good Work and I cannot wait for the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: Nick F. On: March 01, 2011 21:47 EST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Wow this is an amazing story. Inuyasha centainly has several issues to deal with but with Kagome helping I think he should turn out fine. Wonder if Kagome has issues and insecurities of her own. Can't wait to read more now. |
Reviewed By: secret35 On: January 30, 2011 23:03 EST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: WOW!!!!!! I've read this chapter about 4 times now, and every time i get teary eyed when the part when inu comes back and kagome sees him with kikyo. This story is incredably, no, over the top fantastic piece of work. i haven't been this moved in a story for awhile, and i appreciate it so much XD. I love the new spin on things in this first chapter. how it started and just overall everything. I can't wait until you update! im really looking forward to reading future chapters. Im so EXCITED!!!!!! hope to hear from you soon Ja ne XD |