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| "Amber" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Title: Excited
Reviewed By: violet_scythe [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2012 07:42 EST
Comment/Review:
This is really good, I like how you're slowly developing the characters feelings and not rushing them to fast into the conclusion of love and sex. More realistic. The characters are also true to their original forms totally not OOC and I can totally see them getting together. I hope you update soon, I really want to see some more Zuko Sokka action. hehe. -Scythe | Reviewed By: jmscripsi On: August 22, 2011 12:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is awesome. I'm new to this fandom, but I've already scoured the internet and read everything available for this pairing. This, by far, is my favorite. After 7 different websites and countless fics, this is the one I'm most excited to read. What's really great is how well written it is. I'm a senior creative writing major in college and a lot of the time, I rewrite bad fics in my head to make them better. But with your story, I'm not doing that. I'm able to be completely wrapped up in each word, each line, each sentence. If you're still in need of betas at this point in time, I would be happy to volunteer my services. I don't have an account on MediaMiner anymore, but if you respond to comments, I'll check regularly. It's been awhile since I've beta'd, but like I said, I'm a writing major. This is pretty much my life. :) Great job, and I can't wait to read the next chapter! | Reviewed By: alyssa james [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2011 13:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. I truly would have never thought of Sokka and Zuko becoming lovers. This series was one I enjoyed greatly, and I'm glad to see someone writing something this great. Really. You have a way with words that keeps me engrossed in the story. Can't wait for the update~ :) |
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