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| "Paparazzi" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: Ryuichi Sakuma13 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2011 19:13 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
So far, this is a good beginning. I've roleplayed this so many times, its kinda cool to see someone write it up as a story! I wonder if he'll get Tatsuha into as much trouble as I get my Tatsuha into! Ryuichi | Title: Uh...
Reviewed By: BakaYasha [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2011 12:32 EST
Comment/Review:
To the first reviewer, I wasn't aware of this other story, but I looked it up and they are based on completely different premises so I’m not sure how I’m stealing. I write in first person, that story was written in third person and the situation in which they meet are not even close so I suppose the only thing that is possibly the same would be the idea of Tatsuha finding himself working for Ryuichi. That's not stealing someone else’s work, that's using a plot device. If you want to say that my story is stealing from this other persons then you'd have to say that anyone having Hiro and Shuichi sleep together after he and Yuki break up are stealing each others work, or anyone that has Shuichi wind up a drug addict or a cutter as stealing each others work, or any of the other hundreds of over-used plot devices out there in this fandom. I can assure you I am no thief, I wanted to write this story for some time now and I am doing so because it's fun. If you think you've read the plot line too many times, then I guess that's your problem not mine. | Reviewed By: Anon 2011 On: February 04, 2011 12:09 EST
Comment/Review:
So you're rewriting Mayhem's story Ryu's New Assistant? Quit trying to leech off someone else's popularity and get your own ideas. You're nothing but a thief. |
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