Reviewed By: Pens On: June 06, 2011 11:38 EDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review: I think this could turns into a really cool story. Please continue and soon. And I really like your style of writing, your one of the few people out their that don't over explain and the reader is still about to follow along.