| "The Secret Club" Reviews/Comments [ 63 ] |
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Reviewed By: gytj On: November 24, 2011 20:52 EST
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o.O i think i just vomited in my mouth a little bit. thankfully i skipped the incest part (thanks for the warning), but just knowing about it and reading the ending made me feel sad and a little sick (i think i may be empathizing with kagome's distraught feelings alittle too well). hopefully kagome and inuyasha get back together and are truly happy, not having sex like rabbits with everyone and anyone... i also crave for a monogamous ending, lets hope that both inu and kag can do it. |
Reviewed By: A hopeful ms. On: November 21, 2011 13:33 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked your story, but I thought you said that Kikyo wasn't having a major part in this story... You have me nervous, please just don't make inuyasha fall in love with her like you did in the other story, pretty good though! |
Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2011 03:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NICE!! |
Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2011 03:10 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
great update... seems that kagome and inuyasha's relationship isn't progressing much after the engagement other than them sleeping around... interesting talk between sango and kagome - sango does have a point... what will kagome do?... looks like kikyo has shown up... might cause problems for kagome and inuyasha... also will this story be ending soon?... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you... |
Reviewed By: Mellifluous On: September 02, 2011 13:43 EDT
Comment/Review:
This is getting tiring. I feel slightly sick whenever I read a new chapter. You're dragging it too much. I initially started this story because of the way it seemed you wanted it to end ( opposite of your other story)but it looks like you changed your mind about it and now you're even introducing a new character and some new drama, as if there wasn't enough already... I'll stop reading this story, but I wish you luck continuing it! |
Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2011 04:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kagome smiled as she reached out to take his hand. “I don’t know if I would.” Poor InuYasha |
Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2011 02:30 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
great update... seems that the engagement is causing some stress for kagome... looks like kagome & inuyasha have their regular encounter with sango & miroku... so kagome & inuyasha finally told her family... interesting meeting... so there is a complication in their relationship... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you! |
Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2011 00:30 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
great update... seems that kagome is still having a conflict of interests within herself... her talk with sango was a little help... looks like inuyasha really got a ring... so kagome invited inuyasha to the club and he initiated kagome's gathering... interesting that inuyasha proposed to kagome while she was busy... what is kagome feeling / thinking now?... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you! |
Reviewed By: MidniteShadows (not logged in) On: July 21, 2011 16:30 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome. Simply awesome :) |
Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2011 22:05 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
great update... seems that kagome and inuyasha's relationship has gotten serious but they have certain issues to figure out... what will kagome do?... what will inuyasha do?... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you! |
Reviewed By: kazanova [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2011 17:30 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you for updating! I'm so happy to read a new chapter. :) How is your summer going? I hope you're enjoying it! |
Reviewed By: xFinalActsGirlx On: July 18, 2011 16:01 EDT
Comment/Review:
Really great chapter, seems like what everyone thougth they wanted in the beginning isn't exactly what they want now. Hmm? |
Reviewed By: kaggys1 On: June 23, 2011 11:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow is all I can say. Where did u come up with the idea for this story?! Very original. I avoided it at first becuz it wasnt completed and it seemed to out there but im glad i gave it a chance. It totally blowed my mind. Fantastic!!!! |
Reviewed By: kazanova [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2011 07:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, thank you so much for updating! Now, I'm really curious where all this is going to. Kagome seems to be really getting into it, and Inuyasha seems like he might just start wanting her to himself. :) An amazing story! I wish you wouldn't rush it in case you feel you have to update quickly.. Take all the time you need to -- this fiction is totally worth it! Anyways, I'll definitely be waiting for the next chapter and the others that are to come. Hope you're taking good care of yourself, and since summer is here - ENJOY YOUR SUMMER! |
Reviewed By: stripedpants On: June 22, 2011 09:30 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Such an enchanting story! I usually try to avoid works in progress in fear that they won't be completed, but this is definitely worth the risk! Love the story so far; can't wait to see where it's going! Keep up the great work!!! |
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