| "The Life of A Puppet" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: Soul Reader [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2003 06:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi there! Really cool fic. Can't wait to see what happens. Something different from the same 'ol same 'ol ;) |
Reviewed By: Cora [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2002 06:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey Zorella its Kala! That story is sooooooo cool I am *snifs* honored its on meh site lol xD
*claps* Excellent Job! |
Reviewed By: ssjgoddessChico [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2002 20:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really goos, I'm looking forward to an update ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Zorella [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2002 00:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
Well you'd know alot about slow stories wouldn't you >:/
hee, I kinda stole Kreeplings from an old fav cartoon 'Swat Kats' |
Reviewed By: Skipbillion [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2002 23:31 CDT
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hehe, wow I made a lot of mistakes in that post. Just switch words around and you get my point. Oh yea, don't worry about it being a slow story. Just a decent chapter out every few months will keep the public happy(I hope) |
Reviewed By: Skipbillion [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2002 23:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohhh, I'm loving this so far. I like the name you gave the other aliens,"Kreeplings." It's almost got a cute ring to it, but since it's got the word "creep" in it, well it's obvious they arent cute fluffy things.
You swtiched from it being from no one's point in particular of view to Vejiita's. I didn't see a clear switching point so I guess that's a mistake? :x
Hmm I wonder what this chick with a tail means. Ponder, ponder. |
Reviewed By: Zorella [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2002 21:18 CDT
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thnkx Vin,Sugoi! and dbz72 for reviewing!
Um, I thing I did over do the 'freedom' aspect, though overall it worked pretty good e?
Yes, I will continue Puppet, though slowly I'm affraid. |
Reviewed By: dbz72 On: August 10, 2002 01:04 CDT
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Hey.....i'm liking where this is going....I always liked to hear different people's perspective on how Vegeta's life was before earth...I hope you do write this story and please don't end up like other authors who abandon their well written stories and never finish them.....thanx a bunch!! can't wait til the next chapter |
Reviewed By: manga, the Awesome One in pigtails [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2002 06:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, personally I think you overused "freedom" a bit, but it's a great lead-in to a story that sounds riveting. I can't wait to see the rest! :) |
Reviewed By: vin On: August 07, 2002 18:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i want more dammit. this sounds like it could turn into a really good fic so keep going please |
