Title: Coool Reviewed By:Master__Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2011 21:29 EDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 7 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review: This looks like a promising story. youve got a good original character. Maybe make the chapter's a little longer? There are s few minor spelling errors etc. but those arent that big a deal. I look forward to what youre gonna do with this.