| "Windows on the West" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: FuzzyToad On: March 09, 2012 06:49 EST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OK, still one of my very favorites! I love how much emotion you put in such small chapters, I think people can lose the tone of a story by focusing too much on creating long chapters, they aren't necessary. I keep coming back to read this again and again because you have the perfect grasp on who the characters are and how they come to the realizations through time. Can't get enough, though I know all good things come to an end :( |
Title: omjj
Reviewed By: zeata nann On: December 02, 2011 17:07 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this keep it up1! |
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2011 13:37 EST
Comment/Review:
OMG! She knows one of them? I hope that isn't a problem for Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru. It would be nice if she found a mate. The death of the inuyoukai mother and child was so sad. I sure hope that all the rest of the inu are saved, that the village was the last ones left. Can't wait to read what happens next. |
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2011 10:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello, M'dear! I've been reading your wonderful story here, and tho am usually a Loverr of Inu/Kags, you make it so easy to also be a Loverr of this pairing as well. So I do apologize for not reviewing much sooner, as I've been so enjoying this story immensely. Until next install, update when ya can! ;) |
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2011 19:39 EDT
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Awwww, that was so sweet! *warm fuzzies* ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2011 22:45 EDT
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This was an awesome chapter. Sesshoumaru's slight provocation of Kagome's senses when he rubbed her wrist, intentional or not, was sweet, and at the same time gave him confidence because of her response. It also provided a good foundation to build anticipation for what he was about to do. The way he approached his request was so thoughtful. I can't imagine what would suit Kagome as a courting gift. Usually, she just wants to see others do things that make them happy. As much as Sesshoumaru likes to travel, I still think that Kagome would like a home to return to every once in awhile. It's the only thing I can imagine. Can't wait to see what you have planned. ^^ |
Reviewed By: Snowfall1 On: June 19, 2011 17:04 EDT
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Sorry I can't sign in to review. Mediaminer is getting to be too bothersome. That was a cute chapter. I remember that prince well. He sure was lucky to get away with his head, and he didn't even know it. LOL Ooooh, I wonder where Sesshoumaru is taking Kagome! Can't wait to see. ^_^ Poor Kagome. She sure has gotten attached. I hope she perks up soon. |
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2011 23:05 EDT
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That was a cute and sweet chapter. Yes, kids to nail us sometimes, and they also say some of the funniest things. I think this might amuse you. Upon taking our children to see George of the Jungle, my then four or five year old daughter saw George crash into a tree and decided to remark on it along these lines: "Ow! That had to hurt his dick!" Talk about bent over laughing! Well, I'm glad that Sesshoumaru has been given a clue and hope he won't take to long to act on it. I have to wonder if he's going to be so subtle that Kagome won't get it at first. It's sad that she feels she'll be all alone. Can't wait for Sesshoumaru to set her straight. ^_^ |
Title: OMG!
Reviewed By: bRaNdIcHiLeS On: May 02, 2011 07:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. Looking forward to the next post! |
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2011 19:04 EDT
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So sorry, I've been so busy that I haven't had time to review! Satori is so awesome! I'm not surprised that she's meddling. Kouga's maturity did surprised me though. I'm glad he didn't make a fuss. Heh, Sesshoumaru was funny with his plot to make Kagome inaccessible to other males. That was cute. He probably would have continued going on his merry way without his mother's intervention. ^_^ I'm glad that Sesshoumaru bought some decent clothing for Kagome. I have to wonder what type of relationship Satori and Sesshoumaru have. Is it normal for them to not have seen each other in so long? I still haven't reread the story, so please forgive me if that has already been answered. Anywho, nice scheming. ^_^ I'm off to read from the beginning. |
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2011 12:14 EDT
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I can't believe you only have three reviews on this story over here. I will admit that I've been guilty as hell about not reviewing hardly anyone as of late, but there's a reason for it, nothing personal. I've been having problems remembering stories, too, but I think I'll go back and do some reading and reviewing. It's too bad that most of the people I know hate Kagome. *pouts* So sucks. I promise to review the next chapter. Would you mind sending me an email when you update just in case the site fails at that? Thanks. |
Title: This is amazing
Reviewed By: Kyonarai [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2011 22:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love this. I don't think I've ever read such a wonderful interpretation of Sesshoumaru. And I'm glad you didn't completely cut Inuyasha out of the story through some crazy means like some other authors have done. It felt more real. Thanks for writing, PLEASE continue. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: RubyJewel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2011 22:05 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aw, it was kind sweet how Sesshy told Kagome that she won't ever be alone. Nice! Loved it! |
Reviewed By: RubyJewel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2011 20:58 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story was, overall, very enjoyable. I can see why you decided to post in up on MediaMiner.org & FF.net. Is there going to be more chapters? If so, then I can hardly wait! Thank you for sharing another great story with us! |
