| "Of Spring Rain and Thunder Storms" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: snowbird23 On: May 28, 2011 19:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the plot of this story. I like, too, that she's able to breastfeed. That will bond the pup to her even more. I'm glad that Sesshoumaru has taken an interest in her and the pup and that she let him name him. I have a feeling he will continue to play an even bigger role. Some of the conversations between the characters are not always separated, but put together in the same paragraph which can be a little confusing. Other than that, the story is very entertaining. I'm just wondering when the next update will be. It has been awhile. |
Reviewed By: nan_de_mo_chibi_otoko [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2011 00:35 EDT
Comment/Review:
I like this one so far. its already captivating me. I hope to see more from it soon |
Title: Of Spring Rain and Thunderstorms
Reviewed By: 1carinoinu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2011 07:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really well done story - the idea is new (to me and I have read a Lot of Sess/Kag stories, just not all of them) and played out well. Characterizations are consistent and in character and am looking forward to seeing the relationships develop. I'm curious about Sesshomaru's reactions to Kagome and the pup. I understand the whole male dominance thing, but why is he acting that way? Does he realize it? I figure the dominance would only be shown if the male was interested in her or her mate. Or is it something else? |
Reviewed By: LADY SILVERFOX AKA MYCHELLE 79 On: March 31, 2011 17:10 EDT
Comment/Review:
kagome's mom acted like my mom when i got pregnat and then gave birth a month ago it was really sweet. my dad adores the little one:)GOOD STORY PLEASE WRITE MORE PLEASE!!! |
