"Between Pleasure and Pain" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: LaDuena On: April 02, 2011 09:46 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: Glad to see you on mediaminer too! We looove the unedited stuff :D |
Reviewed By: Konoha Ninja [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2011 03:31 EDT Comment/Review: You should continue this. I thought it was a realistic portrayal of how the two could have gotten together, not just "hey, he's hot" or "I will show her what a weakling is not" or "Yamcha's a cheating jerk, I'll show him." |
Reviewed By: Shisha On: March 31, 2011 18:45 EDT Comment/Review: I started reading your stories off of a referral made by temptingtempation who wrote in an a/n that your story "youll be the death of me" was one of the best stories she was currently reading...this motivated me to check you out and i was a little disappointed to only find you on fanfiction.net instead of mediaminer...anyway, i am intrigued by your style of writing because you capture the character's personality very well and have detailed descriptions in your writing...enuff of my rambling..WELCOME TO MEDIAMINER :) |
Reviewed By: The Crystal Rose [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2011 22:25 EDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Absolutely loved it! It was very heartwarming :) |
Title: Love it! Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2011 22:03 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I am so happy you finally decided to post here! Imagine my surprise when I saw your name with the word new next to your story. I love your writing, you are truly amazing! I hope you write more b/v fics and post them on this site too. |