"Bonded in Blood" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Title: Quick Clarification Request Reviewed By: M On: August 22, 2012 01:45 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: It is sad to see that this seems to have been abandoned. I would greatly like to see it finished, or at least continued! A brief question for clarity: Did the HP crew return to Hogwarts to retake a year which had been so completely interrupted, or why are they suddenly back? Beyond that it blends very nicely with the established story line. Good work! | Reviewed By: imsandir [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2012 22:16 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: I'm really enjoying this fic. I like what you are doing with the character and your story development. I would love to see where you are going to take Harry's relationships with Snape & Draco. I hope you are going to continue writing this fic. Do you write on any of the other fanfic sites? | Reviewed By: alyssa james [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2011 11:54 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Don't you just love it when you find stories that make you remember why you love yaoi in the first place? I do. Even though I'm not a Harry Potter fan and have really only seen the first couple movies, you explain this well enough that I can understand it AND enjoy the story. Most writers don't; they assume you have watched/read it before, which isn't always the case. Please continue to write, for I really want to see where this story progresses! And on a completely unrelated note, did you choose your username to honor Junjou Romantica? Cuz I'm pretty sure Aikawa is Usagi's Boys Love editor and Akihiko is Usagi's real name. Just thought that was cool ;) |
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