Title: This must be continued. Reviewed By: Miggy On: April 12, 2011 14:52 EDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10
Comment/Review: Style is 8; this is affected by the grammar of the dialogue, having an error with placing another quote directly after the other causing the seven. I enjoyed this a lot because of the originality in the idea. Never thought of using this device for this particular pairing. :D Please continue.