"The Hanyou Handbook: A Romance" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Title: Awwweee Reviewed By: Rainhugu On: January 13, 2012 12:42 EST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: I enjoyed it very much, read it from start to finish in a span of two days. Lol. Using my Kindle Fire so I could enjoy the festivities in the comfort of my own bed. You did a good job, kept me interested the whole way. Only constructive criticism I would like to say is not adventuress enough, take us on a journey! And don't be afraid to play with a little more dramatic secrets.. be predictable enough but not to predictable. Awesome amount of OOC but not to much. We could still fit the characters with their actions. And what is the babies name? Ahaha. Good job and keep up the good work. (: | Title: :) Reviewed By: iammecya On: April 25, 2011 10:19 EDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: enjoying the story :) | Title: interesting Reviewed By: ardentes1247 On: April 18, 2011 15:47 EDT Comment/Review: Interesting start but it is very short. I also didn't like that it ended on a cliff-hanger like that. I liked the start but I just wish you had posted more. Please post more soon! |
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