| "Bend. I will not break." Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: earlsblueeyedangel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2011 15:30 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice. Can't wait for more on this story. |
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2011 23:25 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor zarbon, at least he went on his own terms. |
Title: Loving it!
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2011 19:09 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is definitely an original storyline. I'm surprised that u don't have more reviews. |
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2011 18:58 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Things are heating up for b/v. I like it:) |
Reviewed By: su On: August 21, 2011 04:36 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, that was an intense chapter. |
Reviewed By: Easy Reader On: July 14, 2011 15:13 EDT
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It's a great redad! It doesn't look like you get the reviews you deserve though. Keep it up girl. Don't let it get you down. |
Reviewed By: Ashley8662 On: June 30, 2011 13:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story.It's different from alot of other fanfic's out there.Please update again soon.. |
Title: woah
Reviewed By: w. l. On: June 13, 2011 15:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the story so far. Can you be more discriptive of the characters? Anyway what about B and V getting back together? Spelling and some of the sentences in your story need a little work. All in all it a good fic. Lets see more. |
Reviewed By: lell [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2011 17:14 EDT
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Looking forward to reading about the aftermath |
Reviewed By: lell [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2011 19:04 EDT
Comment/Review:
I've really been wondering about this story and hope to see more from you |
Reviewed By: lell [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2011 21:16 EDT
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Chapter 5 review: Things have certainly gotten more interesting. I look forward to seeing more bulma/vegeta moments. |
Reviewed By: lell [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2011 20:57 EDT
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Really great beginning and i hope to see more. You should also try posting on fanfiction.net, because you might get more reviews :-) |
Title: interesting
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2011 22:04 EDT
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Bulma and Zarbon as siblings? Sounds interesting already. Please continue. |
