Reviewed By: yankeefan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2003 12:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good fic. Using descrptive language made it really good. If you had action I would have given a better rating. Other than that good job. Keep writing! |
