"May the Spirits Keep you Safe." Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] |
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Reviewed By: shivalatina [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2006 14:17 CDT Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: this is very beautiful. It was interesting how the candle for goku was the one to go out. Very nice work.
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Reviewed By: Ladymadchan On: August 02, 2004 00:06 CDT Comment/Review: This is beautiful. I love how Vegeta always thinks about his forgotten culture in your fics.
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2004 21:30 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Yes, yes, I know I already reviewed this, but I was reading it again tonight so I decided, what the hell? I'll leave another review. Ember, I love everything you write, but this is my FAVORITE one-shot of all time. Thank you so much for writing it.
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Reviewed By: LS On: February 02, 2003 22:57 CST Comment/Review: *Wow* Stunning. This is so beautiful...from start to finish. I love when he says "That is because you do." It's so eerie when he picks up that lantern...*shiver* What gorgeous visuals...very unique...{You choose such wonderful settings.} I want to visit this place again...^_~. |
Reviewed By: VampireGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2002 10:08 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: VampireGoddess=
Whoa, that was exquiset!Lovely and purely original. |
Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2002 19:29 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This is wonderful! I don't recalling reding this before...but I'm glad I did now! :) |
Reviewed By: autumn On: August 27, 2002 12:54 CDT Comment/Review: What can I say? This is one of the most beautifully written stories I've read. The lantern ceremony was made even more special by the fact that we saw it through Vegeta's curious eyes. And the whole energy thing was just breathtaking, really. I can imagine it would have been so beautiful because your words described it so well. I also thought that Goku's light being burned out at the end was a nice touch. Sad. But nice. I was drawn to this story by the gorgeous picture you uploaded - I thought, "I have to know what this is about!" :) |
Reviewed By: Susan On: August 26, 2002 12:27 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: OH. MY. GOD. You really outdid yourself this time. I'm in awe of this brilliant and beautiful piece of work and crying at the same time. Wow!! |
Reviewed By: valeyard [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2002 22:21 CDT Comment/Review: Oh man, I was just going over my email and found this! Didn't see it before (got behind on my email, my bad) This is great!
You describe it all so perfectly! Loved it! |
Reviewed By: Lupin Wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2002 16:06 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: OMG!!!! That was soo cool! The ending there, with Goku's candle, whoa. -lol- I loved this fic! Nicely done! |
Reviewed By: Vampiric_Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2002 16:15 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review: Soooooooooooo sweet, makes me so sad to be single. You can make Vegeta look like such a darling and yet still royal. Wonderfull! |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2002 17:02 CDT Comment/Review: That was truly awesome! |
Reviewed By: moonsaiyanprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2002 14:13 CDT Comment/Review: This was o beautiul! Brillant work! |
Reviewed By: JadaKirin [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2002 00:46 CDT Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Ember, This is really stellar...you brought tears to my eyes twice, once with the beauty of Saiyan ritual, and secondly, the extinguishing of one of the lanterns...
This is truly a beautiful piece of work...be very proud.
Jada |
Reviewed By: Psyfire [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2002 16:19 CDT Comment/Review: I think "whoa" is pretty much the only word I have left in my brain.. you've turned it into complete mush. that was SO beautiful! |
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