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| "Teacher" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] | Reviewed By: vegeta and future trunks [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2015 00:53 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Oh my fucking gosh!!! that was amazing, i loved reading it, those
sex scenes were great and the story was freaking hilarious XD How
did vegeta not know that yamcha was bulma's first??? like come on
now?! I can see why vegeta is mad that goku and bulma slept
together but that was b4 he got with her so, this includes yamcha
as well. bulma aint worrying abt the females he has slept with...so
vegeta needs to calm down lol You just cant leave off there! i NEED
to know how the fight between goku and vegeta will go, i mean
vegeta is livid at this point, i believe he could do some serious
damage to goku right now. plus how will the fight start? will
vegeta just dive right in without words or will there will be some
questions being asked while fighting? hmmm i cant lie, i hope you
make the winner of the fight vegeta or either a draw. Plus this
"second time" between bulma and goku i got know what happened?! so
goku had an affair with bulma while married to chichi?!(gasp)
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE write their second sex encounter, i got know
what happened! Plus after the fight, whats going to happen with
bulma and vegeta? will they resolve their issues and makeup? :) oh
and what will goku say when chichi asks why vegeta came to fight
him? Please write the continuation, this is just sooooo amazing,
please update soon :(
| Reviewed By: angelica_lisa [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2012 07:57 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story - funny but hot at the same time. I hope you will be able to put up a part 2 for this ^^ | Reviewed By: vegeta's_chew_toy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2012 15:06 EDT
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Hahahahhahahaha Oh gosh, I feel like such a perv for reading and getting a kick out of this fic, but it's true. I'm a terrible person. Just wanted to drop a line saying that this was a really funny and lets face it, pretty sexy story that totally is worth it. Although Vegeta and Bulma will always be my ultimate couple, there's something about the potential and purity to Goku that draws you in as well. Gotto love that guy. :) Oh, and I would absolutely LOVE it if you would post this story from Goku's perspective! I laughed when I read "Does he know about the second time?" seriously funny stuff. Either way, any more work from you will be awesome don't be shy! | Reviewed By: neice1176 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2012 21:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it. I am a B/V pairing fan but this was great and I would love to read a part 2. | Reviewed By: rth [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2012 19:18 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a great read. I favor Bulma and Vegeta, but you have to admit Goku is hot and you know how Bulma gets around hot guys. I would love to read Goku's perspective on this, if you still had it... | Reviewed By: Amavera On: July 15, 2011 00:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed your fic! It's well-written and the humor flows naturally, and I like how you explored outside of the cannon while remaining true to the characters. It takes talent to write a humorous hentai piece without making it cheesy. Good job! | Reviewed By: Laelia [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2011 00:23 EDT
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I loved it and hated it at the same time. I really enjoyed your style of writing, but the easiness with which Goku cheated on his wife, apparently twice sort of rubbed me the wrong way. Good job on writing a sort of overdone theme~ | Reviewed By: IdaiNaHakai [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2011 23:42 EDT
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That ending was epic. xD It had me laughing for a good five minutes. I would definitely be interested in a part 2 if you were to write it! | Reviewed By: inuy21 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2011 23:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just want to say that I absolutely ADORE this fic! I give you all kinds of kudos for doing it, and doing it RIGHT. I am a big fan of B/V pairing, but I've recently stumbled onto liking non-canon pairing such as B/G, and as you stated, you know it had to have happened somewhere down the line! I always really loved the way did Goku. He was innocent but NOT stupid! Most people make him so dimwitted it hurts to read, but your Goku was perfect ^^ As for a part 2, well I have to say that I'd be interested in seeing it after reading this, but I also understand the pain of getting it organized and readable. So, I will vote for if you wanna do it, PLEASE do it! If not, it's totally understandable, and I'm glad that at least this was posted and I come back and read it at any time :) | Reviewed By: IdaiNaHakai [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2011 17:52 EDT
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I've only ever read V/Bs, but I loved this! |
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