Title: Good Start! Reviewed By:Master__Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2011 22:29 EDT Comment/Review: Awesome!! This is an excellent work you have here! Hell im definietly gonna come back and re-read this one!! Keep up the good work! Ill admit i only skipped a little of the story, usually when i read other peoples stories i cant finish them cuz they take too long to transition from action to non-action scenes and vice-versa, but you did really well with that! Looking forward to new chapters good luck!!
